The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.
the chart illustrates how
many
oil production per Correct quantifier usage
much
day
in 4 country
between 2000 and 2004
Change to a plural noun
countries
overall
, there was an increase in Nigeria, Chad and Somalia, while
a decline was seen in Congo. in addition
, Nigeria was highest
figure throughout the period.
The oil production in Congo started at 270000 Change the article
the highest
barrels
per day
in 2000, after which it experience
a decrease to 210000 Wrong verb form
experienced
barrels
in 2003, before ending the period at 20000. By contrast
, opposite changes can be seen in the figure for Chad, which not until year
2003, the first 15000 Change the article
the year
barrels
were producted
and increased to 50000 Correct your spelling
produced
barrels
at the end
of the period.
2 million oil production per day
in Nigeria in 2000, with a subsequent fluctuation and a final growth from 2200000 in 2003 to 2300000 in 2004. The figure for Somalia saw similar changes, starting at 8000 berrals
per Correct your spelling
barrels
day
in 2000, flollowing
by levelling off to 40000 and increasing Correct your spelling
following
at
55000 in a year later.Change preposition
to
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