Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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In recent years, scientific discoveries and experimentation
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been revolutionised especially
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advancements in modern technology and much of the research being conducted on
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into why it is
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act. On one hand, people have grown fond towards
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human life is left
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unnoticed
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perceived in a friendly manner as seen
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of them being domesticated and preserved in zoos just to protect
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protection of elephants and
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rhinos
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poachers
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and agriculture thereby mankind will not allow
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of creatures.
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easy to detect any
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usually do not have a long life . unlike
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experiments and it should be lawed as they see them as pets and for domestic
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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