Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
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has
been revolutionised especially Correct subject-verb agreement
have
due to
advancements in modern technology and much of the research being conducted on animals
. Opinions from the general public might view these experiments as barbaric towards wildlife with some seeing it as a justifiable cause, l stand with latter
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the latter
this
essay will look further
into why it is arguebly
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arguably
benefical
act.
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beneficial
animals
and their ecological importance of
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as well as
human life is left unoticed
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unnoticed
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are being
some
of them being domesticated and preserved in zoos just to protect Change preposition
in some
from
going extinct Correct pronoun usage
them from
for example
protection of elephants and rhinoes
from Correct your spelling
rhinos
pouchers
who hunt them for their horns . In Correct your spelling
poachers
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addition
they
even state their Correct pronoun usage
apply
animals
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to
inheritants
to her dogs . Correct your spelling
inheritance
Nonetheless
, animals
may be kept for domestic purpose
and agriculture thereby mankind will not allow Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
scientifics
to Correct your spelling
scientists
use
them in
scared of Change preposition
for
existicting
of the species.Correct your spelling
existing
Therefore
, humans opt to use
supliment
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supplement
supplements
such
as dead people or air instead
of creatures.
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, it is very easy to use
animals
on
experiments its a doable process andChange preposition
in
its
easy to detect any Correct your spelling
it is
disiease
since they can be exposed to any kind of pathogens. Correct your spelling
disease
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difficulty
to find a person to practice on Replace the word
difficult
therefore
its
a wise decision to Replace the word
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it is
use
animals
the procedure maybe
scary no one can volunteer . Correct your spelling
may be
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, animals
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usually do not have a long life . unlike Correct pronoun usage
apply
huma
beings.
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