The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The provided graph and table depict information regarding the average monthly around 1,180
temperatures
and the average number of hours
of sunshine per year
in three major cities including London, New York
and Sydney
.
In general, Sydney
has temperatures
around 25 in January temperature decline in July to around 15 and temperatures
warm to 25 in December. In contrast
, London and New York
have similar trends with temperatures
around 5-10 in January and temperatures
increasing around 25-30 in July after that temperatures
cool around 5-10 again in december
. The main trend New Change the capitalization
December
York
has a higher temperature than other cities at 30 this
year
and Sydney
has a trend contrast other countries. Starting at the year
Sydney
has high temperatures
and mid-year
Sydney
has low temperatures
other cities and temperatures
turn to equal early year
at the end
of the year
.
Therefore
, Information about the time of sunshine in New York
is high of time around 2,535 hours
Sydney
has around 2,473 hours
and LondonAdd a missing verb
has
hours
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