A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply
Dear Rajveer,
I hope you are doing well. I was super excited when heard that you are continuing your study at The University of British Columbia, Vancouver, Canada. I am writing
this
letter to provide you a
few details about Biological Science.
Let me give you some details regarding Add the preposition
with a
this
program. As you know, I have recently completed this
course at the same institution. So, this
course is 4 years long and there are a total of 120 credits. It is a yearly degree. Hence
, you do not have to worry about the subject registration. Subjects will be assigned to you by the University. Most of the subjects will end up with a final assignment, a quiz in class or a group presentation.
As you know, this
organization is one of the well-known Universities in Canada. Chances are very high of getting a job.All the tutors and other departments are really helpful. Most importantly, they have a
24-hour access to a library. Remove the article
apply
Hence
, you can easily carry out your work at any time.
I wonder,
if you might not know how to apply as a beginner. Remove the comma
apply
First,
you need to visit the official website of the academy . Then
, create your student Login id
and upload all the required documents for the application. After receiving approval, you can enrol for the subjects by signing into your student account.
Wishing you all the best.
Warm wishes,
Maninder KaurCorrect your spelling
login ID
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coherence
For coherence, ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and transitions smoothly between ideas for an even stronger structure.
task achievement
Consider adding more specific examples or personal experiences with the course to enhance task response.
structure
Effective use of paragraphs, each addressing a separate aspect of the query.
greetings
Clear and appropriate greeting and closing used.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite