The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph shows the comparison of sales of 3
music
formats between 2011 and 2018. Use synonyms
Overall
, the percentage of streams illustrated an upward trend Linking Words
while
that of CDs purchased experienced a downward trend.
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To begin
with, in 2011, the majority of people bought CDs to listen to Linking Words
music
and it was more than half. Use synonyms
However
, it gradually decreased throughout the given timeframe and reached around 25% in the end. Linking Words
In contrast
, streams gained popularity dramatically. At Linking Words
first,
less than a tenth used streams but it rose constantly and surpassed that of the consumption of CDs in 2016. After reaching 30% in 2017, it Linking Words
then
outweighs that of downloads, reaching around 38% in 2018. Linking Words
Finally
, it became the most preferred method of Linking Words
music
sales.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the beginning, approximately 35% of the total Linking Words
choose
to download the Wrong verb form
chose
music
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the rate continuously rose and peaked at about 43% in 2014. Linking Words
However
, after hitting the highest, it slightly declined throughout the given period and ended up at 30% in 2018.Linking Words
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