The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the
air
pollution in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
almost all the lines were going down in
this
15-year period, but the transport line remained constant. The sum of all the
air
pollution was lost approximately 4%. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the total
air
pollutant group fell dramatically. The category industry declined slowly at
first,
and it dropped sharply from 1993 to 1996, and
then
it went down gradually. Roughly speaking, it is similar to the total pollutants trend. The pollution was reduced
around
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3% in
this
one. An upward trend can be seen in
air
pollutants caused by transport.
However
, the figures were still around 1%.
About
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Regarding
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households, the decrease was steady in
this
period, and it nearly reached zero
percent
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, and almost lost 1% of
air
pollutants.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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