The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
An adult
sugar
cane is ready to harvest in 12 to 18 months. One
can harvest in one
by one
manually using a scythe or, if one
has the budget, it would be good to use a vehicle to harvest sugar
canes faster. After that, the harvested sugar
canes need to be crushed by the crusher to extract its juice
. Purify the juice
with a limestone filter so there are no sediments left in the juice
. Then
, one
has to bring the juice
to an evaporator above a stove. This
process will evaporate the water content inside the juice
and change it into a form of syrup. To extract the sugar
crystals, the syrup will have to be rotated fast to create enough centrifugal force that can separate it from its crystals. The last
step is to keep the sugar
crystals in a dry and cool place.Submitted by azkalfath07 on
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