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Writing Samples
Band 8

you missed international flight due to a problem at the airport write a letter to the airline. in your letter: describe what happend that caused you to miss your flight explain how missing your flight impacted you clearly start what you would like the airline to do write at least 150 words. you do not need to write any adress

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Roy, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I have missed my
flight
 A342 on 12th March at 11: 20 AM from your airport after doing check-in for my luggage. Now I have all my luggage got transferred to destination with
flight
. When I was doing check-in for my baggage, behind the reason of security airline hold my trunk to do check-in on 11: 10 AM and assured me that I will reach there on time. But nothing happened like that and boarding for my
flight
 got closed. I am very much frustrated from your airline service that you have provider to me, please give me guaranty me that the discomfort I received from your staff will not be repeated in the future.
Also
, there is huge caused at my work to miss the seminar of my product lunch, I am requesting to airline please book another
flight
 as early as possible and give half refund of my
flight
 ticket or book hotel room to wait near to airport to reach on time for the next departure. Hope you will understand my situation and do needful as soon as possible. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Roy
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Grammar and Accuracy
To improve clarity, ensure to revise and correct grammatical errors and typos. For example, instead of 'airline hold my trunk to do check-in', consider 'the airline held my luggage for additional checks'.
Structure
To enhance coherence, consider a clearer structure with paragraphs dedicated to each part of the prompt: describing the incident, the impact on you, and your request to the airline.
Detail and Development
To strengthen your arguments and requests, detail more about how missing the flight impacted you personally and professionally, providing specific examples if possible.
Task Response
You followed the instructions well by describing the event, its impact, and what you want from the airline.
Tone
You maintained a formal tone suitable for writing to an airline, which is appropriate for the context.
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