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Challenges make life interesting, and overcoming them makes life meaningful. How do you understand this statement? Write an essay(about 300 words)to express your opinion.

#challenges #life
It is commonly known that we are living in an age where
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technology
 and society are developing at a rapid rate and changing every aspect of our
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.At the same time,we should be faced with challenges and we
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 to try receiving
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 and challenge
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 to make our
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 more exciting and meaningful.
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, improving speaking English ability is not only making our
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 more abundantly than before but
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 no one can deny that improving speaking English ability can play a key role in achieving career success.
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 how to improve our speaking ability .Perhaps
the first step is
 that individuals need to practice on
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 basis. Another necessary step is reading extensively to expand knowledge and enrich vocabulary .
Lastly
 ,it is suggested that people attend speaking training courses to learn useful techniques to speak fluently and clearly .By combining
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 methods ,we can achieve the aim .In conclusion ,there are many well-documented benefits of exceptional and it is worth investing the effort to improving speaking skill and I highly
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 that everyone ,especially students ,invest the effort to improve speaking skills.
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Task Achievement
Expand on the main idea by offering a broader range of examples and perspectives beyond improving English speaking skills to fully demonstrate understanding.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your essay into clear paragraphs, each with a distinct purpose. Your introduction should more precisely preview the points you will discuss.
Coherence & Cohesion
Aim for variety in sentence structure and vocabulary to enhance readability and engage your reader more effectively.
Task Achievement
Address both sides of the statement to provide a more balanced and comprehensive discussion.
Task Achievement
Your essay demonstrates a clear understanding of the importance of challenges in personal development.
Coherence & Cohesion
You successfully conveyed the importance of improving English speaking skills as a specific example of overcoming challenges.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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