The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

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The given picture presents the cycle process of recycling glass

bottles

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it is clear that

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there are five main stages of the cycle of recycling which consist of the recycle bin, treatment plant, cleaning , reforming and moulding. Looking

at the first stage

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of the cycle, used

bottles

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from anywhere are littered in the recycle bin before the recycled dump truck collects them from the trash. The truck will carry these glass to the treatment plant and take all of the

bottles

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to the washing

machine

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and the sterilising

machine

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not only to eliminate every contaminated

particles

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but

also

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to destroy bacteria on the objects. After cleaning, cleaned

bottles

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will move to the crushing

machine

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to crush them

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into

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small particles and

then

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they are passed to the melting

machine

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to change their form from solid into liquid. Afterwards, liquid from the previous method will be transferred to the moulding process to mould new recycled

bottles

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. The reproduced products will be packed and ready for delivery to the mall before the process is repeated all over again.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

With a growing world population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Some people believe environmental problems require global attention whereas some believe they can be dealt with on a national level. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some employers of er their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs,believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more ef ective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?