The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
The given picture presents the cycle process of recycling glass
bottles
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are five main stages of the cycle of recycling which consist of the recycle bin, treatment plant, cleaning , reforming and moulding. Looking
at the first stage
of the cycle, used
bottles
from anywhere are littered in the recycle bin before the recycled dump truck collects them from the trash. The truck will carry these glass to the treatment plant and take all of the
bottles
to the washing
machine
and the sterilising
machine
not only to eliminate every contaminated
particles
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particle
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but
also
to destroy bacteria on the objects. After cleaning, cleaned
bottles
will move to the crushing
machine
to crush them
to
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into
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small particles and
then
they are passed to the melting
machine
to change their form from solid into liquid. Afterwards, liquid from the previous method will be transferred to the moulding process to mould new recycled
bottles
. The reproduced products will be packed and ready for delivery to the mall before the process is repeated all over again.
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