The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
The given picture presents the cycle process of recycling glass
bottles
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are five main stages of the cycle of recycling which consist of the recycle bin, treatment plant, cleaning , reforming and moulding.
Looking at the first stage
of the cycle, used bottles
from anywhere are littered in the recycle bin before the recycled dump truck collects them from the trash. The truck will carry these glass to the treatment plant and take all of the bottles
to the washing machine
and the sterilising machine
not only to eliminate every contaminated particles
but Change to a singular noun
particle
also
to destroy bacteria on the objects.
After cleaning, cleaned bottles
will move to the crushing machine
to crush them to
small particles and Change preposition
into
then
they are passed to the melting machine
to change their form from solid into liquid. Afterwards, liquid from the previous method will be transferred to the moulding process to mould new recycled bottles
. The reproduced products will be packed and ready for delivery to the mall before the process is repeated all over again.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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