WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The two plans present the location of an educational institution in 2006 and today.
Overall
, Lynwich College
is now less natural than before and it has more transport links than in 2006. Moreover
, students can now buy food and drink on the campus.
The trees on the left of the college
building 1 were cut down and converted into a Library room. Also
, the library which was below the car park was demolished and converted into a big sports centre. Now a road which links the sports facility with the other roads and cafeteria was constructed.
A library hall is now installed in the west of the
Correct article usage
apply
college
building 1 and is linked with short paths to both college building
2 and Correct your spelling
College Building
college building
2. Correct your spelling
College Building
Additionally
, a cafeteria is now available on
the centre of the Change preposition
in
college
which is connected by roads to all facilities
available at Lynwich. The car park in the north was decreased in size and Correct article usage
the facilities
a
bike storage was built on Remove the article
apply
it's
left.Correct your spelling
its
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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