Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that rich

countries

must assist poor

countries

that suffer from natural

disasters

with humanitarian

logistics

. Regarding that notion, I completely agree with the action because of the following reasons.

First,

humanitarian

aids

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can be directly used by the victims. Since it is not plausible for them to access several facilities in order to afford their needs after the

disasters

, the provided

logistics

that come from the

aids

can be

their

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temporary resources that can help them to strive

from

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vulnerable conditions.

This phenomena

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can be seen

on

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some

countries

that

currently

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in their combat eras

such

as Palestine or Ukraine that are likely to receive

aids

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in the form of useful

freights

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such

as medicines, blankets and instant foods that can fulfill their necessities and hinder them from self shortages.

Moreover

, humanitarian

logistics

are more sustainable. The supply can still be used over periods, especially when there is a likelihood on the possibility of following

disasters

. Take,

for example

, the humanitarian

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aid

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that

have

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been sent by Indonesia to the

victim

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victims

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of Taiwan’s earthquakes, which

have

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proven to help them survive

in

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the next day when there was a

following

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quake. It

also

can be witnessed among the victims of Japan’s flood in Nagoya

on

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2010, where almost 60% of them could survive for several months

due to

the abundance supply of

logistics

that were still

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used at that moment,

while

they were waiting for the

endavour

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endeavour

of local municipalities to hold reconstructions on the impacted area. In conclusion, I completely agree with the argument that many developed

countries

must deliver humanitarian

aids

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to

the

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developing

countries

that suffer from natural

disasters

. It is because that type of

aids

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can be directly used by the victims and

are

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likely to be more sustainable.