The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph depicts amount of the junk food
consumption
by the youth Replace the word
consumed
during
25 years.
Change preposition
for
It is clear that
both Fish and Chips and Hamburgers had an up ward
trend Correct your spelling
upward
while
pizza
showed a down ward
trend.
In 1975, Fish and chips consumers stood at the highest position of using with 100 Correct your spelling
downward
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
times
eaten per year. In the second stage was Hamburger
by 10 Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
times
of consumption yearly and Pizza
stood at least of
popularity Change preposition
apply
with
under 5 Change preposition
at
times
.
During the first decade, Pizza
and Hamburgers experienced a tremendous increase to 35 and 85 times
respectively. From 1985 to 1995, Pizza
followed a doubling in
80 Change preposition
of
times
also
Hamburgers popularity showed a moderate climb by
15 Change preposition
of
times
. From 1995 onward, both group
maintained at the same level.
From 1985 to 2000, the rate of Fish and Chips eaters had a remarkable drop from 97 to 38 Change to a plural noun
groups
times
however
it showed a noticeable growth of 97 number between 1980 and 1985.Submitted by bakhti on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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