Some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People
are
judging Unnecessary verb
apply
someone
's behaviour at first
sight is hot
topic nowadays. Some pupils believe that Add an article
a hot
first
Correct article usage
the first
impression
is the last
impression
but others reckon that we should take time
to describe someone
traits until we better Change noun form
someone's
known
Wrong verb form
know
to
them. Change preposition
apply
This
essay will discuss both view
and Change to a plural noun
views
according to
my perspective
we need some Add a comma
perspective,
time
to judge someone
.
To commence with the first
view, first
and foremost thing is
Verb problem
,
people
believes
that Change the verb form
believe
first
Change the article
the first
impression
is the last
impression
because your first
appearance will attracts
Change the verb form
attract
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
towards you. For example
, if you go for interview
and wear Add an article
an interview
the interview
the
formal clothing as Correct article usage
apply
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
non formal
cloth you will Add a hyphen
non-formal
looks
well educated with all know of ethics and Change the verb form
look
well
raised person and it will put Correct article usage
a well
the
great Correct article usage
a
impression
on your interviewer. Therefore
, first
impression
Fix the agreement mistake
impressions
is
necessary Correct subject-verb agreement
are
for attracts
Change preposition
to attract
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
.
Moving forward to others
Change noun form
others'
other's
opinion
, Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
people
need to take some time
to thier
personalities. We cannot judge a book by its cover until or unless we read it. Some Correct your spelling
their
people
personalities Change noun form
people's
is
not look good because they don't want to show off Change the verb form
are
thier
power of money. Correct your spelling
their
the
For example
, an
airport there is Change preposition
at an
guy
who weared a former cloth and Add an article
a guy
the guy
trying
to save Wrong verb form
tried
a
life of Correct article usage
the
child
who got cardic Add an article
a child
arrest
but Replace the word
arrested
people
at airport
Correct article usage
the airport
refuse
him to treat Wrong verb form
refused
child
because he Correct article usage
the child
did
not dressed like a doctor but after his Verb problem
was
successful
saved Change the word
successfully
life
Correct article usage
the life
of
child tells the Change preposition
apply
people
that he is famous Indian doctor Anand. Hence
, people
needs
to take Change the verb form
need
time
to judge someone
before making any descion
towards them.
Correct your spelling
decision
To conclude
, I believe thatCorrect article usage
a
first
impression
is necessary to shows
Change the verb
show
about
your personality but taking Change preposition
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
time
and judging someone
is better because it tells about Correct article usage
a persons
persons
nature and occupation.Change noun form
person's
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