The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The diagram compares the floor scheme of the central
library
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from now to 20 years ago.
Overall
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,
although
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there have been significant changes in various rooms and the central area of the
library
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, there are similarities between the two designs. Looking at the older plan;When entering the
library
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, there was an enquiry desk to the
right
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and a reading
room
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to the left. Two tables and a number of chairs were situated at the centre of the
library
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and to the
right
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of them were the
adult
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non-fiction
books
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and to the left, were the
adult
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fiction ones. The
room
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for children’s
books
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was located at the top
right
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corner and if anyone wanted to access the computer games, they had to go to the top left
room
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. Shifting the attention to the new plan, it is noticeable that there
has
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been major changes including the removal of the tables and chairs alongside
adult
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non-fiction
books
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. Amenities for catering have been included
such
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as self-service machines and a cafe
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the
right
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. A computer
room
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is located at the lower left corner and the reference
books
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have replaced
adult
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fiction. There
are
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now
rooms
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room
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for newer activities
such
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as storytelling and lecturing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, right, room, adult, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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