The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The diagram compares the floor scheme of the central
library
from now to 20 years ago.
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Overall
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although
there have been significant changes in various rooms and the central area of the Linking Words
library
, there are similarities between the two designs.
Looking at the older plan;When entering the Use synonyms
library
, there was an enquiry desk to the Use synonyms
right
and a reading Use synonyms
room
to the left. Two tables and a number of chairs were situated at the centre of the Use synonyms
library
and to the Use synonyms
right
of them were the Use synonyms
adult
non-fiction Use synonyms
books
and to the left, were the Use synonyms
adult
fiction ones. The Use synonyms
room
for children’s Use synonyms
books
was located at the top Use synonyms
right
corner and if anyone wanted to access the computer games, they had to go to the top left Use synonyms
room
.
Shifting the attention to the new plan, it is noticeable that there Use synonyms
has
been major changes including the removal of the tables and chairs alongside Change the verb form
have
adult
non-fiction Use synonyms
books
. Amenities for catering have been included Use synonyms
such
as self-service machines and a cafe Linking Words
in
the Change preposition
on
right
. A computer Use synonyms
room
is located at the lower left corner and the reference Use synonyms
books
have replaced Use synonyms
adult
fiction. There Use synonyms
are
now Correct subject-verb agreement
is
rooms
for newer activities Fix the agreement mistake
room
such
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, right, room, adult, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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