The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The diagram compares the floor scheme of the central
library
from now to 20 years ago.
Overall
, although
there have been significant changes in various rooms and the central area of the library
, there are similarities between the two designs.
Looking at the older plan;When entering the library
, there was an enquiry desk to the right
and a reading room
to the left. Two tables and a number of chairs were situated at the centre of the library
and to the right
of them were the adult
non-fiction books
and to the left, were the adult
fiction ones. The room
for children’s books
was located at the top right
corner and if anyone wanted to access the computer games, they had to go to the top left room
.
Shifting the attention to the new plan, it is noticeable that there has
been major changes including the removal of the tables and chairs alongside Change the verb form
have
adult
non-fiction books
. Amenities for catering have been included such
as self-service machines and a cafe in
the Change preposition
on
right
. A computer room
is located at the lower left corner and the reference books
have replaced adult
fiction. There are
now Correct subject-verb agreement
is
rooms
for newer activities Fix the agreement mistake
room
such
as storytelling and lecturing.Submitted by viana.elahi on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, right, room, adult, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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