The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
A glance at the graph provides the global
sales
of games software, DVDs or videos and CDs
from 2000 to 2003 in billion
dollars
.
Overall
, the vast majority of the items increased in sales
during the given period, whilst the sales
of CDs
gradually reduced.
According to
the information shown in the chart, the sales
of CDs
were 35 billion
dollars
which was the most in 2000 and were three times more than that of games software which were
the least at the Change the verb form
was
sametime
. Correct your spelling
same time
On the other hand
, the sales
of DVDs or videos were 19 billion
dollars
in 2000 and expriened
a 12-Correct your spelling
experienced
billion
- growth in 3 years which the sales
grow
to 31 Wrong verb form
grew
billion
dollars
in 2003. By contrast
, the sales
of CDs
reduced from 35 billion
dollars
to 32 billion
dollars
although
the sales
of which were always the most in the given time.What should be particularly mentioned is that the sales
of games software also
had an increase from 12 billion
dollars
to 19 billion
dollars
between 2000 and 2003.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the global trend of eletronic
devices slightly changed in the early 21 century.Correct your spelling
electronic
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