The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
A glance at the graph provides the global
sales
of games software, DVDs or videos and
CDs
from 2000 to 2003 in
billion
dollars
.
Overall
, the vast majority of the items increased in
sales
during the given period, whilst the
sales
of
CDs
gradually reduced.
According to
the information shown in the chart, the
sales
of
CDs
were 35
billion
dollars
which was the most in 2000 and were three times more than that of games software which
were
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was
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the least at the
sametime
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same time
.
On the other hand
, the
sales
of DVDs or videos were 19
billion
dollars
in 2000 and
expriened
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experienced
a 12-
billion
- growth in 3 years which the
sales
grow
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to 31
billion
dollars
in 2003.
By contrast
, the
sales
of
CDs
reduced from 35
billion
dollars
to 32
billion
dollars
although
the
sales
of which were always the most in the given time.What should be particularly mentioned is that the
sales
of games software
also
had an increase from 12
billion
dollars
to 19
billion
dollars
between 2000 and 2003.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the global trend of
eletronic
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electronic
devices slightly changed in the early 21 century.
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