The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
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A glance at the graph provides the global
sales
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of games software, DVDs or videos and
CDs
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from 2000 to 2003 in
billion
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dollars
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.
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, the vast majority of the items increased in
sales
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during the given period, whilst the
sales
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of
CDs
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gradually reduced.
According to
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the information shown in the chart, the
sales
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of
CDs
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were 35
billion
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dollars
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which was the most in 2000 and were three times more than that of games software which
were
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the least at the
sametime
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same time
.
On the other hand
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, the
sales
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of DVDs or videos were 19
billion
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dollars
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in 2000 and
expriened
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experienced
a 12-
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- growth in 3 years which the
sales
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grow
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to 31
billion
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dollars
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in 2003.
By contrast
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, the
sales
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of
CDs
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reduced from 35
billion
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dollars
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to 32
billion
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dollars
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although
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the
sales
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of which were always the most in the given time.What should be particularly mentioned is that the
sales
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of games software
also
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had an increase from 12
billion
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dollars
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to 19
billion
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dollars
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between 2000 and 2003.
To sum up
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, it can be apparently seen that the global trend of
eletronic
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electronic
devices slightly changed in the early 21 century.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, cds, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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