In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Although
technology affects agriculture
, many individuals around the globe are still going hungry. There are many reasons that can impact people’s lives.
These days technology helps people to improve their agricultural skills in the world. The high-tech machines and tools provide situations for people to plant, water and harvest their crops, while
this
situation is not equal for all countries
like African nations
because usually, these countries
do not have advanced vehicles and tools to carry out their work easily. On the other hand
, the exports and imports of cereals and vegetables become hard. Nowadays, because of overpopulation and other problems many countries
try to store their supply in order to use them in difficult situations and there is no supply to export to other nations
.
Regardless, there are some solutions to solve these issues. In urgent situations, many developed and developing countries
should make decisions to help weak nations
. For instance
, they can share and send their supplies to those countries
to prevent disasters. Also
, they can make some contractions to export their advanced machine to improve their agriculture
. Regarding this
, the developed nations
can send their engineers and environmentalists to these countries
to explore and find the problems and make some plans to deal with these problems.
To sum up
, however
, technology can help countries
to develop their agriculture
, and most people in the world suffer from famine. To solve this
problem, all nations
are responsible for supporting these countries
to improve their agriculture
from sending food and supplies to exporting high-tech machines and tools.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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