The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featuers,and make comparisions where relevant

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number

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a number

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of steps involved in making process of fast food like

noodles

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.

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although

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it is very easy to cook the

noodles

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, there are so many

procedure

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to get the

noodles

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from its basic material.In the following

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I'm going to

atlk

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talk

about how the

noodles

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are being made.

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,there are

total

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of eight steps in

making

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the making

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process.These stages include some major

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processes

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like storing the

flour

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, cooking

of

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noodles

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and labelling the final product.Rollers are used to blend the water and oil with

flour

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.

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, the mixture is passed to

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a container

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which converts the mixture into dough strips.

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to that ,

vegetables

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spices

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and spices

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are inject

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to

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mixture

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the mixture

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. Among eight steps,

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the

first step is getting

flour

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from outside and

store

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that in silos.Following that ,the stored

flour

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is passed through

mixer

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the mixer

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to add some water and oil substance.

Thirdly

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,rollers transform the blended substance into dough sheets.

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,in

next

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stage

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the dough sheets

are convert

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into strips.

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,sheets are able to get the noodle shape.

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,the next step involves

in

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transforming strips into discs.Once,they get full disc noodle shape,

cooking

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the cooking

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step helps the discs to get dry by frying them in oil.

Consequantly

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Consequently

,the discs

are fill

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into cups.These cups have already

with

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some vegetable spice.

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,the cups are

get

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sealed in

sealing

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the sealing

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stage.Once the sealing is done,the final

noodles

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products are ready.