The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
the picture illustrates the
process
of recycling organic waste to make a new garden fertilizer.
Overall
, the
process
comprises a number of steps, beginning with having a
plastic
container
with air allowed to go through holes in the body and ending up collecting compost,
then
using it in the garden. At the start of the
process
, they need a special bottle made of
plastic
with holes in the body to allow air to go into, which is followed by putting rubbishes in order
such
as at 15
centimeters
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at the bottom, grasses in the next 15
centimeters
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and newspapers at the top. After those steps, the
container
will be added nitrogen and exclusively hot water. The
process
continues with the mouth ò the
plastic
container
is covered and heat is released through the holes at the body of the
plastic
container
.
Finally
, after leaving for 6 months, the compost is in the bottom of the
container
and can be used in the garden.
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