Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
contemporary world, any new product can be know
through different kinds of advertisements.some people say that it motivates us to Change the verb form
be known
purchase
things we do not necessary and others says
that it gives information about Change the verb form
say
new
product in the market . I partly agree with the statement and discuss both Add an article
a new
the new
the
views.
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apply
One
the one hand ,we come across Correct your spelling
On
different
Add an article
the different
medium
of advertising in Fix the agreement mistake
mediums
every day
life on billboards , social media , pamphlets and televisions. When we watch all Correct your spelling
everyday
this
make
us Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
to
Change the verb form
apply
purchase
the
products which we do not need at all. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, during the
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apply
Christmas
there Add a comma
Christmas,
is
an advertisement on Facebook stating Wrong verb form
was
that
50 % off on Correct word choice
apply
Air
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an Air
fryer
which Fix the agreement mistake
fryers
make
me Wrong verb form
made
to
Change the verb form
apply
purchase
after looking offer , once I brought it hardly use
7 times till
now it's been 6 months Change preposition
apply
cause
it is not necessary to me for daily Correct word choice
because
use
.It happens to many people tempt
to Wrong verb form
tempted
purchase
which is not essential.
On the other hand
,certain advertising educate
the public Change the verb form
educates
of
Change preposition
about
the
new products , what are their Correct article usage
apply
use
, how can we use
in
our daily Correct pronoun usage
them in
life
and how can we make our lives easy . There are smartFix the agreement mistake
lives
vaccum
cleaners in the market which Correct your spelling
vacuum
vaccum
house themselves Correct your spelling
vacuum
with out
human intervention just Correct your spelling
without
by
one click .Change preposition
apply
For example
,while
going to work every day I use
to Wrong verb form
used
saw
billboard Wrong verb form
see
advertisement
about Anytime fitness Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
gym
zero joining fee ,which make me Change noun form
gym's
to
join Change the verb form
apply
gym
and become a habit of training every day as Add an article
a gym
the gym
result
it gives me good fitness Correct article usage
a result
as well as
mental health.
To sum up
,it has both benefits and drawback
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drawbacks
of
advertisements, so choose wisely before you buy something and question yourself Change preposition
to
you
Correct word choice
whether you
won't
it or not . Correct your spelling
want
However
, some ad gives insight view before we purchase
as it
play Correct pronoun usage
they
significant
role in our daily Add an article
a significant
life
.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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