The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
A glance at the diagram provides the flow chart for producing garden fertilizer by recycling organic
waste
.
Overall
, there are five steps which commence with preparing an empty plastic container
and end with waiting for the waste
to become compost.
According to
the information shown in the diagram, the plastic container
used to produce garden fertilizer is 2m3.After having a plastic container
, food should be put into the container
and made up to 15 cm. Secondly
, grass should be added and make it up to another 15 cm. After putting newspapers in the container
, the waste
can be added.As the organic waste
is in the container
, it needs nitrogen and hot water before the heating process.Finally
, it takes 6 months to wait for the organic waste
to turn into compost after heating.Then
, the compost is used as garden fertilizer.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the procedure is simple although
it requires a long time for waiting.Submitted by s99104032 on
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