The table below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The table provides data about activities done by people who were jobless in the UK

last

year broken down by gender and time.

Overall

, what stands out from the table is the top three activities were the most common for both females and males.

Furthermore

, housework is the most popular for women to do. Looking at the details, it can be seen that job hunting was quite common for both genders.

In addition

, there was a higher percentage of unemployed gentlemen who chose to spend their time by doing gardening rather than ladies.

Moreover

, housework, shopping, job hunting and visiting friends or relatives were more popular than others.

However

, drinking was the least common activity for people who have no work yet in the UK.

Also

, women did not like to play sports in the morning and the afternoon compared to men.

Subsequently

, It can be noticed that the unemployed loved to watch TV in the afternoon.

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