The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.▪Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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how

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times

Activex

,

Java

and Net were taken from

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the network

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during five

weeks

.

Overally

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Overall

,

Activex

had

the

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were taken by users more than others. Meanwhile, Net was less popular and

Java

was in the middle rank

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, their frequency

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over time.

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with,

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the numbers

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numbers

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of downloading Acivex

rised

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rose

in

weeks

1, 2 and 3 to about 100. After that, it

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down

then

hightened

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heightened

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again to more than 120. In

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,

Activex

fluctuated during

weeks

3 to 5. In

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contrast

,

Java

had a steady positive slope

and

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in

week

1 with 45

times

reaches to more than 80 in

week

5. In spite of its

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increasing

trend,

Java

could not overtake

Activex

during

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5

weeks

.

Also

, Net had decreased in numbers until

week

3 and dipped

in

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about 20

then

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and over 40 in

week

5. Even so, it was at its maximum in

week

5 point but,

at the

end

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Net has downloaded half of

Java

and

one third

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of

Activex

. Totally, in most of

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the weeks

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weeks

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Activex

was double

times

of

java

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Java

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and triple

times

of

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Net.

Meanwhile

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this

ratio was changed some in

weeks

2 and 3.