The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate information about the graduate and postgraduate
students
who did not go into full-time work
after leaving college in the UK in 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the grapes is that between graduate and postgraduate students
there was a very large difference of approximately 10 times which further
was the highest in the 2 types of students
. While
the voluntary was the lowest overall
.
According to
the graduate students
, the further
study was around 29,665 which was the peak of the type of work
. While
Part-time work
was as nearly as unemployment, Part-time work
had just over 17,000 people
and unemployment had just under 17,000 people
. However
, voluntary work
had approximately 3,500 people
.
In addition
, the number of postgraduate pupils, further
study was at the top of this
type and it had 2,725 people
while
close to part-time work
had just under 2,700 people
. Moreover
, unemployment there was well over 1,600 pupils and voluntary work
had 345 pupils which was the lowest of all types.Submitted by name79sinlapa on
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