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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Presented for consideration is a line graph giving statistics pertaining to the
waste
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 produced by three different companies over 15 years.
Overall
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, it can be noticed that the
waste
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company
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C
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 produced experienced a remarkable upward trend,
whereas
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 those for companies A and B saw a decline.
Additionally
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, not only increasing through the period but
company
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C
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 's
waste
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also
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 became the highest number compared to the others. Looking at the figures for
company
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C
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, which observed an increase in producing
waste
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. To be more specific, its
waste
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 stood at roughly 5
tonnes
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 in 2000, before increasing gradually to more than 9
tonnes
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 in the period's end. Moving on to the other companies were estimated to decrease over time. Regarding
company
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C
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, its produced
waste
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 increased slightly from under 9
tonnes
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 to approximately 10
tonnes
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 in the following 5 years,
however
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,
this
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 number decreased sharply to just a mere 3
tonnes
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 by 2015. With respect to
company
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 A, its
waste
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 declined from 12
tonnes
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 at the beginning to just around one-fourth of that throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, c, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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