Many countries offer a free health care system to their citizens rather than relying on private health care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a free system, and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.
A large number of nations offer their
people
a
free Remove the article
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health
care
instead
of charging them with money as in private health
care
. There are both advantages and disadvantages to having a
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health
care
compared to the paid system.
Firstly
, it is worth mentioning that free health
is as it's
name suggests, free, with no need to pay a large sum for fixing a broken arm. Correct your spelling
its
For example
, a person with illness
like cancer who can't afford to buy themselves the prescribed medicine, may not have to worry about working out on their jobs overtime to get them. Add an article
an illness
Therefore
, free health
care
means that poor people
won't have to worry about paying for their treatment.
Secondly
, the
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health
care
may prevent many deaths
of the
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people
from various viruses like ebola, covid
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COVID-19
and
etc, Correct word choice
apply
due to
the required vaccines being given to people
freely without much hastle
. Correct your spelling
hassle
For example
, it is said that during the Covid pandemic
US citizens didn't have much access to medical help which led to a high number of Add a comma
pandemic,
deaths
. Therefore
, free health
care
might help to prevent deaths
from lethal viruses. On the other hand
, free health
care
may mean that the overall
quality of medical care
may drop due to
rushed appointmens
or long wait times. Correct your spelling
appointments
appointment
For example
, free healthcare in South Africa had many issues like wait times, dated medical eqipment
and facilities Correct your spelling
equipment
as well as
poor disease control.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to free healthcare, but I stand by the opinion that advantages
outweigh the disadvantages Correct article usage
the advantages
due to
free healthcare being able to improve the overall
quality of life of simple citizens as well as
prevent many deaths
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