The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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The map illustrates the comparison changes between the present and the future in an industrial area in the town of Norbiton.
Overall
, it is clear they are planning to construct the new facilities and a bridge. However
, the roundabout in the middle and its roads remain the same.
The entrance street in the South will be replaced with a small roundabout and on the two sides of the road there will be shops and a medical centre. Five factories in the East will be demolished and changed into three houses plus at the end
of the road there will be a school. The playground will also
added as well as
the small pathway that is
connected to the playground.
In the West, The new
extended road from the centre roundabout will lead to another two accommodations. Change the adjective
newly
Moreover
, in the North, There is a spanking new path which will have the house on the left-hand side and a bridge will be built to access another house.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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