Some people say that a lot of scientific research done today is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a common belief that the issue of the government supports financial for the study of science is the cause of wasting of hours and money.
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perspective, I do not fully agree with
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because creating new products from
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the development of the economy but
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the population's lifestyle more convenience
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Ensure your introduction and conclusion are clearly identifiable and effectively summarize the main points.
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Support your viewpoints with more detailed and relevant examples to strengthen your argument.
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Ensure that your ideas are clearly explained with relevant details and that your arguments are easy to understand.
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You have shown an understanding of both the positive impacts of scientific research and addressed the common concerns.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • long-term benefits
  • advancements
  • unpredictable outcomes
  • high-risk field
  • significant breakthroughs
  • immediate benefit
  • financial drain
  • mismanaged funds
  • limited practical applications
  • public opinion
  • tangible results
  • spectacular successes
  • ethics
  • moral justification
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