The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The map shows major changes that happened at West Park Secondary School over a 30-year
time
period
and its proposed plan in 2010.
Overall
,the main road remained the same throughout the
period
but houses and
farm land
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farmland
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disappeared from the map.
Firstly
,houses were converted into car parking and a science block in 1980.
In addition
,a science block was added to the main school building during
this
time
.Farmland faced a major change.It was replaced by a sports field in 1980,which was replaced by car parking in 2010.
In contrast
,the main road remained the same throughout the
time
period
.
On the other hand
,the sports field was shifted to the right and car parking took place in 2010.
Additionally
,the playground was reduced from its original size in that given
time
period
.
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