The diagram details the process of making wool. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates the step-by-step

process

of manufacturing

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wool

.

Overall

, more than twelve steps are involved in the

process

of producing

wool

, in which some of the end product is used for various purposes.

Initially

, the sheep's

fur

is sheared and cleaned with the help of certain tools and dried

in

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outdoors. After drying, the

fur

is

then

moved on to the next

process

of spinning.

Industry made

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machine spins the

fur

and

turns

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the

fur

into

wool

and string, after the spinning

process

, the string is

then

taken to

recycling

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stage.

On the other hand

, the

wool

is made into tufts of

wool

and

then

stored separately in the

tuft

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storage in huge quantities of numerous shades. The tufts of

wool

with different shades

is

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are

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carried out into balls of yarn

similarly

, as an end product, they are used for knitting clothes. tools carpets for houses and jackets to use in winter.