Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivataion for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both thee view and give your opinion.

A group of individuals

thinks

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that there should be

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a

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fixed

law

to penalize someone for any

crime

while

others believe that

punishment

should be subjective. I believe that the

punishment

should be based on individual circumstances and the

law

should be only deciding some guidelines on which

judge

should make a decision.

To begin

with, if someone commits a

crime

then

a fixed

punishment

should be decided on which a

judge

delivers. The rules of criminal justice

law

advise a

judge

to make judgements based on the

law

.

For instance

,

for

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a burglary offence in the bank could result in 10 to 20 years of jail time

that

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is different from small crimes

such

as shoplifting which may be just 6 months. So, the

punishment

is based on the severity of a

crime

. It will help people to decide on crimes

according to

law

only. A

judge

cannot make

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decison

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decisions

decision

based on his personal opinions.

On the contrary

, the

judge

has to decide based on

individual

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the individual

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offense

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offence

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.

For example

, if someone is mentally ill and commits

crime

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a crime

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then

he needs to first go to a psychiatrist and

need to

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be offered a chance to make his health better and

provided

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a second chance.

Similarly

, some destitute people do robberies when they have nothing to eat.

Thus

,

this

will make

law

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the law

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system more empathetic

then

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than

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now.

To conclude

,

this

should always be noted why a certain type of

crime

is

commited

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committed

and what are the conditions of the criminal. Ergo, it makes

law

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a law

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system which

let

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criminals a second chance to improve themselves. But, in other

cases

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cases,

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the

law

should only decide what

punishment

has to be decided in a certain case,

otherwise

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otherwise,

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a

judge

could make some mistakes if he gets emotional in some cases which could be detrimental

for

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to

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public safety . From my perspective,

punishment

should be based on

types

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the types

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of crimes and

situation

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the situation

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of a criminal.