Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivataion for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both thee view and give your opinion.

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that there should be

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fixed

law

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to penalize someone for any

crime

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while

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others believe that

punishment

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should be subjective. I believe that the

punishment

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should be based on individual circumstances and the

law

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should be only deciding some guidelines on which

judge

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should make a decision.

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with, if someone commits a

crime

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then

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a fixed

punishment

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should be decided on which a

judge

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delivers. The rules of criminal justice

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advise a

judge

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to make judgements based on the

law

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.

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,

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a burglary offence in the bank could result in 10 to 20 years of jail time

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that

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is different from small crimes

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as shoplifting which may be just 6 months. So, the

punishment

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is based on the severity of a

crime

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. It will help people to decide on crimes

according to

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law

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only. A

judge

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cannot make

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decison

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decisions

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based on his personal opinions.

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, the

judge

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has to decide based on

individual

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offense

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offence

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.

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, if someone is mentally ill and commits

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crime

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a crime

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then

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he needs to first go to a psychiatrist and

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be offered a chance to make his health better and

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a second chance.

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, some destitute people do robberies when they have nothing to eat.

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,

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will make

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law

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the law

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system more empathetic

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then

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now.

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,

this

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should always be noted why a certain type of

crime

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is

commited

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committed

and what are the conditions of the criminal. Ergo, it makes

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law

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a law

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system which

let

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criminals a second chance to improve themselves. But, in other

cases

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the

law

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should only decide what

punishment

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has to be decided in a certain case,

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otherwise

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otherwise,

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a

judge

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could make some mistakes if he gets emotional in some cases which could be detrimental

for

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public safety . From my perspective,

punishment

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should be based on

types

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the types

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of crimes and

situation

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the situation

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of a criminal.