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The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides information about the top ten countries with the most
internet
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 users in the year 2016. The nations included China, India, the United States, Brazil, Japan, Russia, Nigeria, Germany, Mexico, and the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, in terms of the number of
people
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, China had the most
internet
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 users,
while
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 Mexico had the least.
However
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, comparing the percentage of the
population
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, the British had the most access to the
internet
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,
in contrast
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 with Indian
people
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.
According to
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 the data, approximately 721 million Chinese were able to access the
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internet
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, which accounted for slightly more than half of the
population
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. Meanwhile, India, with almost the same number of citizens, had only around 35% of
people
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 that can use the
internet
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, which made them the nation with the least
internet
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 coverage by
population
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.
In addition
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, the UK had 92.6% of
internet
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 users,
in other words
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 around 60 out of 65 million
people
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,
thus
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 the country had the most
internet
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 access nationwide.
On the other hand
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, with nearly 130 million residents in Mexico, only half of the
population
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used
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 the
Internet
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, people, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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