The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The data table illustrates the top ten Internet consumers by country in 2016. It includes the position, name, amount of internet
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users
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per
population
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( in percentage ) and total
population
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data. The first position in the table takes China. It has a number of 721,434,547
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. In second place is India, which has around 200,000,000 fewer. And the third is the U.S., having three times less than China enjoyers of the World Wide Web. Surprisingly, neither of the areas taking the first three positions has a high percentage of internet consumers
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. The winner here is the U.K., where almost 93% of residents use the net. Only 2%
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is Japan, with 91% per total
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. And
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but not least, Germany and the U.S., with 88% of both.
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almost 93% of the
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in the U.K. uses the net, it is one the lowest numbers of net
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. The only lower one is Mexico, which takes the 10th position in the table.
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