The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type
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The chart illustrates the amount of incidents and
injuries
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by different transportation types in 2002.
Unites
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Units
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are measured in 100
million
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passenger miles travelled.
According to
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the transportation types, we have commuter
rail
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, heavy
rail
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, light
rail
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and bus.
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,
it is clear that
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the
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most incidents
happend
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happened
happen
with
bus
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buses
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and light
railway
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railways
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. The number reaches 76. The safest transportation type
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the provided data is commuter
rail
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. Talking about
injuries
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it states, that 66
million
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PMT
injuries
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by bus appeared in 2002. The safest in
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question is commuter
rail
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. Here we have only 17
million
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passenger miles travelled
what
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makes it almost three times fewer. 
In addition
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, 225 and 173
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PMT demand
responces
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responses
response
for incidents and
injuries
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were reported in 2002.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words injuries, million, rail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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