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The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
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The maps depict an airport at the present time and its transformations after renovation in the next year.
Overall
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, It can be seen that many facilities are going to be added.
Also
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, some areas will be unchanged during
this
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 period. First of all, the location of the old security
passport
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control
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 and
passport
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control
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 customs sections will remain unchanged. The check-in
area
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 will be relocated from northwest to northeast of the security
passport
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control
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 sector in place of the cafe.
Moreover
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, the café will be situated in the northeast of
passport
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control
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 customs.
Also
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, a wide variety of facilities
such
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 as an ATM machine, a sky train, a car hire station and a bag drop
area
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 will be added in the airport. The walkway which is located in the north of the airport will be demolished and the expansion of
this
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area
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 will provide 10 more gates. The departure and arrival doors in the entrance
area
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 will be doubled next year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passport, control, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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