The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The maps depict an airport at the present time and its transformations after renovation in the next year.
Overall
, It can be seen that many facilities are going to be added.
Also
, some areas will be unchanged during
this
period. First of all, the location of the old security
passport
control
and
passport
control
customs sections will remain unchanged. The check-in
area
will be relocated from northwest to northeast of the security
passport
control
sector in place of the cafe.
Moreover
, the café will be situated in the northeast of
passport
control
customs.
Also
, a wide variety of facilities
such
as an ATM machine, a sky train, a car hire station and a bag drop
area
will be added in the airport. The walkway which is located in the north of the airport will be demolished and the expansion of
this
area
will provide 10 more gates. The departure and arrival doors in the entrance
area
will be doubled next year.
Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words passport, control, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: