The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words
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The map illustrates information about the expansion and planning of the shopping plaza in the present to the future in the city.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the shopping mall will expand while
the green area will disappear.
According to
today, the shopping mall have
7 functions play area, noodle shop, cinema, department Change the verb form
has
store
, toilet and Supermarket the department store
is the biggest space and there are a lot of green areas at the eastern of the building. Moreover
, there is a small car park with just 1 building and stand-alone fitness at the southside.
In addition
, planning in the future will be bigger than in the present and there are 9 functions while
the department store
is the biggest space similar to before expansion. Furthermore
, a beauty salon, shoe shop, cosmetic store
, gift shop and 3 fashion stores will be added to the shopping mall. However
, the green area will disappear and the parking will expand in the future.Submitted by name79sinlapa on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words store with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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