The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph represents
amount
of changes and Add an article
the amount
type
of Correct article usage
the type
junk
food
consumed by Australian teenagers bewteen
1975 and 2000.
Type of Correct your spelling
between
junk
food
such
as Pizza and Hamburgers was increasing bewteen
1975 and 2000. Fish and Chips was discreasing Correct your spelling
between
bewteen
1975 and 2000.
In 1975, Fish and Chips was 100 Correct your spelling
between
times
per year
. for eaten per year
. Then
, it was discreasing
to 1980, Correct your spelling
decreasing
times
near by 80 per year
. However
, it was slight
Change the word
slightly
increasing
in 1985. Wrong verb form
increased
Therefore
, it was subsantial
Correct your spelling
substantial
discreasing
in 2000.
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decreasing
increasing
Junk
food
about
Pizza and Hamburgers was increasing Change preposition
for
bewteen
1975 and 2000. Correct your spelling
between
Junk
food
of Pizza in 1975 was near by
0 Correct your spelling
nearby
time
per Change to a plural noun
times
year
. Then
, it was subsantial
increasing to 1995 about 80 Correct your spelling
substantial
substantially
times
per year
. Also
, Junk
food
of Hamburgers in 1975 was near by
0 Correct your spelling
nearby
time
per Change to a plural noun
times
year
. Then
, it was subsantial
increasing to 2000. In 2000, it was increasing for 100 Correct your spelling
substantial
substantially
times
per year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words junk, food, times, year with synonyms.
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