The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The charts illustrate the changes that took place at West
Park
Secondary School
in 1950, 1980, and 2010.
Overall
, a comparison of three
maps reveals a complete transformation of the Correct article usage
the three
school
.
In the year 1950, there were 4 blocks. First of them were houses, then
it was constructed as a car park
united with the Science Block
in 1980. Then
, in 2010, the car park
's area expanded while
the science block
remained the same. Turning to the second block
, it was a school
near the houses. In 1980, it became the main building of the school
, and in 2010, it experienced no changes. Regarding the
third Change preposition
The
block
, it
was farmland in 1950. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Then
, it was rebuilt as a sports field in 1980. After that, Sport
Field's building condensed because of the car Change the noun form
Sports
park
's expansion. The fourth block
, named Playground, remained the same area in 1950 and 1980, while
in 2010, this
area was reduced.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, block with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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