The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The provided maps give information on the facilities of the central library two decades ago and its condition nowadays.
Generally speaking, it can be clearly seen that the library has undergone the vast majority of improvements and nothing remained steady except
of
the entrance location.
First and foremost, it is evident that tablets and chairs which were located in the central area, were removed. Change preposition
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Moreover
, the area for children's books, located on the northeast corner of the map 20 years ago, was transformed into a lecture room. Linking Words
Additionally
, the reading room in the southwest corner where visitors could borrow newspapers and magazines turned into a computer chamber, Linking Words
due to
some circumstances.
With regards to a place for CDs, videos and computer games, Linking Words
this
area expanded and there were added two contemporary sofas, children's fiction books and a place for events, dedicated to storytelling. Linking Words
Furthermore
, central library heads decided to build a cafe for individuals who are keen on reading books, to enhance their impression and reinforce the atmosphere overwhelmingly.Linking Words
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