The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagrams show how the floor plan of a public library has changed over the

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20 years.

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, the library has been redesigned with more modern areas, and some old sections have been removed or moved to different places. Twenty years ago, the centre of the library had tables and chairs. On the left side, there were CDs, videos and computer games at the top, adult fiction

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in the middle, and a reading room at the bottom. On the right side, children’s

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were at the top, adult non-fiction

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were in the middle, and the enquiry desk was near the entrance. Today, the plan is quite different. The left side now has a computer room at the bottom and all reference

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above it. The top left part is used for children’s fiction

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, sofas and storytelling events. In the centre area, the tables have been removed and replaced by a café on the right and self-service machines next to the adult fiction section. The old enquiry desk has been replaced by a small information desk. At the top right corner, there is now a lecture room.

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
layout
shelving
reading area
reference section
encyclopedias
dictionaries
circulation desk
transactions
digital media
computer stations
multimedia rooms
café area
social environment
leisure-friendly
expanded reading areas
user experience
comfortable seating
children's section
engage younger readers

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