The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words

The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words
The map shows the south side of the mall now, and what are the plans for the future just in the picture below.
Firstly
, as we can see in the first picture, the play area will be removed and replaced by a beauty salon,
also
cinemas and the cafe shop will be removed and
instead
of the new buildings will be there,
such
as cosmetics shops, a shoe store and gift card shop. Moving forward to the south side,
car
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park will have some changes too, will be bigger and the fitness centre will be
also
demolished.
Secondly
, the golf course and the park will disappear as well, to make space for the bigger shopping centre. The first entrance will remain the same, but another entrance will be through the department store on the right side,
also
more stores will be added between
supermarket
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the supermarket
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and the department store and the toilets will remain
at
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the same place it was before.
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