The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words

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The map shows the south side of the mall now, and what are the plans for the future just in the picture below.

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, as we can see in the first picture, the play area will be removed and replaced by a beauty salon,

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cinemas and the cafe shop will be removed and

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of the new buildings will be there,

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as cosmetics shops, a shoe store and gift card shop. Moving forward to the south side,

car

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the car

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park will have some changes too, will be bigger and the fitness centre will be

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demolished.

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, the golf course and the park will disappear as well, to make space for the bigger shopping centre. The first entrance will remain the same, but another entrance will be through the department store on the right side,

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more stores will be added between

supermarket

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the supermarket

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and the department store and the toilets will remain

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the same place it was before.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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