The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph depicts the percentage of people that
illiteracy
in different regions and between males and females
after one year.
Overall
,it can be seen that the rate of females
is always higher than that of the males in all 6 different areas.Additionally
, both illiteracy
rates of females
and males are highest in South Asia whereas
the rates were lowest in developed countries.
To begin
with,the female amount was at its peak in South Africa
at about 54%.This
is followed by Arab states,where the percentage of illiterate females
is approximately 52%.Sub-Saharan Africa
had the at 49%.In East Asia/Ocenania, the proportion
of females
accounted for 20% which nearly doubled the proportion
of women in Latin America/Caribean.Almost the bonus of functional illiteracy
females
was above 10% while
in developed countries the proportion
was only 2%
In the sector of illiterateness male proportion
,South Africa
had the highest rate at nearly 33%.Followed by Sub-Saharan Africa
accounted for 31%.Furthermore
, the quota of men in Arab states stood at approximately 29%.Additionally
, Latin American/Caribean was at 10%.Moreover
, the ratio of men in East Asia/Oceania was nearly 8%.Similarly
to the female percent,in Developed Countries the functional illiteracy
rate of men was extremely low only accounting for 1%Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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