The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

The graph illustrates the salary of the number of cafes in New York above

last

year. In general, what stands out from the graph is that four cafes showed there were wild

fluctuation

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between January and December. Looking at the details, the tea room sharply fluctuated from January to April. After that, the tea room levelled off to September 120,000 dollars

then

there was a rose above 130,000.

Next,

the tea room plummeted to under 60,000.

By contrast

,

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express there was a steady

fell

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of about 80,000 and levelled off between April and June. After that, Internet

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improved

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130,000 dollars. Focusing on wi-fi cafe and cafe cool, the former rose gradually above 60,000 in May

then

sharply fluctuated from May to September and considerably doubled above 180,000.

On the other hand

, the latter fluctuated wildly between January and September by almost 40,000.

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, there was a

rose

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60,000

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,

then

cafe cool

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Cafe Cool

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dramatically climbed for a month above 120,000 dollars.