The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
The bar diagram illustrates the academic level of Bulgarian people who wanted to migrate to other countries in the
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years
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2002, 2006 and 2008. It is evident from the data,
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Bulgarian
poeple
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with secondary education showed higher rates of migration in all the given years. The students with higher
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secondary
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showed an upward trend in 2002, with gradually decreased over the period of given three years namely 2006 and 2008 with figures 65%, 61% and 59% respectively. The pupils with higher education
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17% in 2002 which steadily increased to 20% and declined drastically to 9% in 2006 and 2008 respectively.
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, the primary and lower education rose steadily with the figure of 18%, 19% and 32% in 2002, 2006 and 2008 respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • summarize
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