The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.
The table compares
global
Correct article usage
the global
selling
of cell phones Replace the word
sales
producing
Wrong verb form
produced
in
various companies between 2005 and 2006. Change preposition
by
It is clear that
Nokia stood at the highest rate of selling in two years although
, BenQ mobile had the lowest place among all companies.
Regarding the statistics of 2005, what stands out from the scheme is that Nokia, Motorola and Samsung with 32.5, 17.7 and 12.7 respectively had the main parts of worldwide marketing. Both Nokia and Motorola followed a slight increase by 2.5% and 3.2 % sequentially however
, Samsung decreased slowly from 12.7% to 11.8%.
Focusing on 2006, displays that Sony Ericsson experienced noticeable
climb Correct article usage
a noticeable
by
1.1%. LG mobiles had a negligible decline by .1% Change preposition
of
moreover
, BenQ mobile dropped remarkably from 4.9 %to 2.4 %and other brands fell substantially by 3% at the same time.Submitted by bakhti on
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