The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table provides information about the percentage of students who attended four different school types in the year 2000, 2005 and 2009.
Overall
, apart from community
schools
, other groups of educational institutions faced a declining trend throughout the years. The most popular one was voluntary-controlled
schools
,
then
replaced by community
schools
. Specialized education always be the least popular among young adults.
According to
the table, voluntary-controlled used to take up slightly more than half of the students
then
started to steadily decrease to 38% in 2005 and 20% in 2009 respectively. Grammar
schools
used to have approximately a quarter of teenagers study in 2000,
then
continuously fell to 12% in 2009. Meanwhile, the specialist
schools
remained in the
last
place with a small decrease from 12% to 10%.
In contrast
, the community
schools
were the only ones with increasing growth in popularity, with
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incline to 32%, and eventually took the top place with 58% of pupils deciding to enrol.
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