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The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the
USA
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seafood
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 imports in 2002 and 2023 by
country
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 of origin and forecast for 2023. In general, China is the
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 with the biggest contribution to
seafood
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 in the
USA
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, and the
country
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 with the lowest contribution of
seafood
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 to the US is Ecuador. Looking at the chart, the
USA
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 imported
seafood
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 from many countries. The biggest contributor was China with 28 per
cent
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, followed by Thailand with 23 per
cent
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 and Canada with 16 per
cent
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. Moving to countries with contributed below 10 per
cent
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. There were 4 countries with
lowest
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 contributions of
seafood
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 to the
USA
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 namely Indonesia, Vietnam, Ecuador and Others. Indonesia and others contributed 9 per
cent
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, Vietnam contributed 8 per
cent
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 followed by Ecuador with
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 7% and became the lowest
country
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 that contributed
seafood
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 to the
USA
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, seafood, country, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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