The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.

The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.
The diagram illustrates the modifications that have taken place on
the
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Paladise
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Paradise
Island
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most of the facilities have changed except for a natural spring and a beach and all trees on the
island
are pulled down.
Moreover
, new cycling paths and recreations are set up and there are a few changes in the
island
's shape. On the left-hand side of the
island
, a boat pier was redesigned into a cruise ship pier which had a wider footpath and two separated ways
at the end
. The beach had received a swimming permit but the area was slightly less than the previous. The scientific research station was replaced by a hotel complex with a swimming pool located at the top of the building.
On the other hand
, a new opening restaurant sprung up at the centre with a new BBQ area beside it. There was a new cafe located at the bottom of the old natural spring. A sign was put on and the umbrella was erected at the scenic lookout zone in the top right corner.
Additionally
, the cycle path was constructed and covered all the
island
's areas.
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