The graph below presents the employment patterns in the usa between 1930 and 2010

The graph below presents the employment patterns in the usa between 1930 and 2010
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of USA labour force Employment in the year from 1930 to 2010.
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, it is clearly seen that in farming, the percentage of employees in fishing and foresting was the highest at the beginning of the period and the lowest
at the end
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of the period.
To begin
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with, all labour force in given employer was under the 20% until 1980 except farming, fishing and foresting. After 1980, the Industrial steadily grew and reached 25% in 1990,
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to increase to about 30% and remained it until 2010.
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, Technical and sales and office experienced almost 5% in 1930 and after a little growth in percentage in 1970 and 1980, both arrived at approximately 18% in 1990,
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a slight surge of increasing in technical at about 28% in 2010.
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, sales and office stayed under 20% until 2010.
On the other hand
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, other services accounted for almost 15% in 1930, after a slight
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in 1940 to about 18% stable at 15% until 2010.
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, Only farming, fishing and foresting were the largest proportion 75% from the beginning of the period to 1990 to 28%, after constantly decreasing it reached 5% in 2010.
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