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the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 , with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 , with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
#information #percentage #population #four #asian #countries #cities #predictions
The provided line graph depicts information
regrading
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regarding
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 the
percentage
 of the population in four countries,
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the Phillipines
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Phillipines
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Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia living in urban cities from 1970 to 2020, with
prediction
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predictions
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in
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for
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 future for 2030 and 2040.
Overll
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Overall
, The
percentage
 of
total
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the total
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 population of Malaysia and Indonesia have
a
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the
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 same
trend
. It
shown
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showed
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steady
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a steady
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 increase. Which
percentage
 of Malaysia
stared
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started
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around
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at around
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 32
percent
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per cent
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 in 1970 and
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a continous
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continous
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continuous
 rise in 2020
approximately
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to approximately
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 80
percent
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per cent
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.
In
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 the same time, The
percentage
 of Indonesia in 1970
around
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was around
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 15
percent
 and
slow
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it slowly
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soar
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soared
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at
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in at
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 2020 around 50
percent
.
In contrast
,
Two
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the Two
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 countries
has
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have
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 a similar
trend
 including
Philipines
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the Philipines
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 and Thailand. It
depict
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depicts
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a fluctuate
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fluctuate
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fluctuating
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trend
 from 1970 to 2020. The peak point of
Philipinse
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Philippines
around
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was around
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 50
percent
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per cent
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 in 1990 and information
decrease
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decreased
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 in 2010
around
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to around
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 40
percent
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per cent
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.
While the
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The
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percentage
 of Thailand has a small
fluctuate
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 from 1990 to 2010 and after that
have
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has
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steady
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a steady
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 increase.
However
, The
percentage
 of the population living in four countries has a similar
trend
 in 2030 and 2040.
While
 the main
trend
have
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has
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increase
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increased
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 in the future.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, trend, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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