The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrad-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countires.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrad-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countires.
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The two different tables present regarding the purchase of ethically traded produce in the years 1999 and 2004 in five nations across Europe.
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, in both years, the countries with the highest combined
sales
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of fair-trade produce were the UK and
Switzerland
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. In general,
sales
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of fair-trade goods increased in the majority of nations. Notably, there was a slight drop in the sale of
bananas
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in
Sweden
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and Denmark between 1999 and 2004. Turning to the data more in detail, in 1999, the nations who sold the most
coffee
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were
Switzerland
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and Denmark with figures of 3 and 1.8 million euros respectively. In the same year,
Sweden
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sold only 800,000 euros of
coffee
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. 5 years later, there was a notably large increase in
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for the UK. The figure increased by over 10 times.
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, it overtook
Switzerland
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to become the leading
coffee
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seller. By
this
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time, the lowest
coffee
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sales
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continued to belong to
Sweden
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. With regard to
bananas
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, in 1999,
Switzerland
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had the most
bananas
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followed by Denmark. In 2004,
Switzerland
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’s
sales
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increased by over 3 times,
whereas
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Demark’s consumer spending on
bananas
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halved.
Sweden
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showed a similar trend, where its
sales
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went down from 1.8 to 1 million euros.
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